Thursday 25 October 2018

Quick Write/Harry potter

Hi today I will be writing a short story for you also known as a quick write.


We are given the sentence starter and we have to carry it on.  
This is a very short story but I still hope you like it.

Harry Potter
I reached below the water surface trying to grab a piece of Gillyweed for Harry Potter. By getting him Gillyweed it will give him ils for one hour so he will be able to breath underwater for the  Triwizard Tournament.  There re some side effects but most of them turn out positive so hopefully he will not get any injuries.  Three hours later he won yay I have helped the one the only HARRY
POTTER!!!!!!!!!!!! I am an hero I am amazing I am the one the only Neville Longbottom.

Thanks for reading I really appreciate it I hope you enjoyed my short story.






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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 October 2018 at 12:19

    Hi Carys, it's Summer. I really enjoyed your short story, it reminded me of the quick write I posted. Next time reread it again so that all the words have all the letters in them. Do you know everyone in Harry Potter?

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  2. Pip T9 November 2018 at 08:26

    Hi Carys, Watch out J. K. Rowling - Here Carys comes! I've an idea, Imagine if you teamed up with someone to be your story illustrator and they created matching imagery. Be the perfect reply to your story.

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  3. Anonymous15 November 2018 at 10:04

    Hello Carys,
    I love your descriptive story and how its about Harry Potter because no one else does a quick write about Harry Potter.
    By Karma

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