Quick Write/Harry potter

Hi today I will be writing a short story for you also known as a quick write.

We are given the sentence starter and we have to carry it on.  

This is a very short story but I still hope you like it.

Harry Potter
I reached below the water surface trying to grab a piece of Gillyweed for Harry Potter. By getting him Gillyweed it will give him ils for one hour so he will be able to breath underwater for the  Triwizard Tournament.  There re some side effects but most of them turn out positive so hopefully he will not get any injuries.  Three hours later he won yay I have helped the one the only HARRY
POTTER!!!!!!!!!!!! I am an hero I am amazing I am the one the only Neville Longbottom.

Thanks for reading I really appreciate it I hope you enjoyed my short story.

Quick Write: Trapped

Hi today I will be writing a short story for you also known as a quick write.

We are given the sentence starter and we have to carry it on.  

Particles of dust drifted... 
through the air. I thought that this moment was priceless but it was not. The light filtered through the cold iron bars. The air was crisp and cold. On the concrete wall there was graffiti. It told me to turn around so I put my hand in my pocket ad slowly turned around and there he was. As if he turned up out of thin air. He was standing right there my dad but he was not quite alive he was pale and lifeless all he said was "run", but I could not run. My feet were stuck. I was petrified but I needed to ask my dad so many questions like where he had been and who killed him and why he left that night but then he burst into the room the person who killed him. thinking quickly I puled out my pocket knife and held it to his throat. The next thing I know wake up it is time for school it was all a dream but it just felt to real.

I hope you liked my quick write please comment on my blog post if you have any feedback or feedforward. 

Thanks for reading!